Illustration and Visual Narrative - Task 4: Animatic Illustrations

26/11/25-4/1/26 / Week 10-Week 14
Janice Cheah Pei Ern / 0376497
Illustration and Visual Narrative / BDCM / Taylor's University
Task 4

LIST / JUMP LINK

TASK


INSTRUCTIONS


TASK
Script Chosen
“Aim for the sky, but move slowly, enjoying every step along the way. It is all those little steps that make the journey complete.” - Chanda Kochhar

Mood board / Reference

Figure 1.0 Moodboard / Reference

I underlined the keywords from the script chosen and try to find pictures on what I can do on each keyword for the illustration. 
(Extracted from Documentation file)
Sky
-Using something bright like a star as the dream the character is aiming for
-Night sky and stars create calm and imaginative atmosphere

Move slowly, enjoying
-Gentle movements such as walking through flowers and slow pacing
-Walking through flowers as appreciating the process 

Steps, journey
-Footprint show small actions
-More footprints to represent the journey
-Character moves closer to the dream in the end

Sketches
At first, I did some sketches according to my moodboard / reference board. However, after letting my tutor review, he mentioned that it will be harder to animate, especially on the leg moving up the steps part. He mentioned to limit our animation and try to be as lazy as possible as it will benefit our animating process. He also suggested that I should play with different shots too.
Figure 1.1 1st Sketch Draft

After letting him review, I thought of changing my character into a bear instead because it is easier to draw. I also followed his suggestions on making the enjoying part a scene where the hand is on the flowers. I tried to do minimise the walking animation for the little steps part. 
Figure 1.2 2nd Sketch Draft

However, my tutor mentioned it will still be tough to do that. So I asked him whether I can just move into the next scene straight away which he agreed it will be better.
Figure 1.3 2nd Edited Sketch Draft

After animating, my tutor mentioned I should try and play with perspective. He also fixed my second scene because he mentioned the hand looks a little off. He also mentioned the text should be like a part of the drawing, whether as a middle ground or a background. He also brought back the fade out and fade in concept for my ending scene. 
Figure 1.4 Refinement by Mr. Hafiz

He also showed me how the text should look like when in the video which should be something like below:
Figure 1.5 & 1.6 Text blending with visuals

So I redrew my final sketch before moving into Illustrator.

Final Sketch:
Figure 1.7 Final Sketch

Illustrator Process
I digitised my sketch in Illustrator using techniques I learnt and change the line strokes to look like it is drawn.
Figure 1.8 Illustrator Process

Illustrator New Techniques
Other than revising what I learnt, I also try to look up on new Illustrator techniques I can apply to my work. 
Figure 1.9 New Technique #1 (Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7aNsiJxaixg)
I want to try out drawing grass without taking too much time so I followed this tutorial video to create grass brushes with different greens and just draw out grass lines with brush tool.
Figure 1.10 New Technique #2 (Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8gXPiLqO70c)
I want to create flowers with some gradient and identical petals so I followed this tutorial video to turn polygon shapes rounded by using Pucker & Bloat tool. Next, I transform the flower and adjust the angle so it won't look flat.
Figure 1.11 New Technique #3 (Video: https://xhslink.com/o/8vQyxcH0pRN)
I want to draw out star trails as I think it will be interesting and bring focus to the star. I used a quarter of a circle and apply the transform effect to add copies of it and rotate them in a circle. 
I also applied different brush strokes to the star trails and other objects which I learnt during physical tutorials.


After Effects Process
Then, I moved on into After Effects to animate it.
Figure 1.12 After Effects Process

After Effects New Technique

Figure 1.13 New Technique #4 (Video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/_ddVPV85Ajs)
As my 2nd scene needs to have the flowers moving continuously, I look up on tutorials on how to do it. I followed the video and use the Motion Tile and Mirror Edges function to loop the flowers to continuously move.

I also use ElevenLabs to generate a Text-to-speech narrator audio that is gentle and suitable for the video.
Figure 1.14 Prompt for AI Narrator Audio


Final Video:

Background music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7nNhwcj5AlU
Rationale:
For my video, I adopted a child-like visual style to reflect the theme of pursuing dreams while enjoying the process, expressing a sense of innocence and imagination. A bear was chosen as the main character as it is commonly associated with childhood and comfort, creating a gentle and reassuring tone. The star in the sky symbolises the dream, while the flowers and footprints represent the small steps taken along the journey. As the bear gradually moves closer to the star, a zoom-in on the footsteps near the end highlights how small, consistent actions can accumulate and lead toward a larger dream.

Documentation:

FEEDBACKS
Week 11
Sketch should be more simple as it will be hard to animate it.

Week 12
Sketch draft looks overall okay.

Week 13
1st Review: Overall needs to have more perspectives. The text should be one with the visuals.
2nd Review: Overall is better and improved.


REFLECTIONS

During the making of this video, I practised the skills I have got throughout the module especially when it comes to Illustrator. For example, adding shadows and changing line strokes directly. I struggled at first as there were some things that I didn’t really get it right such as some parts of my drawing look odd and my placement of text should be one with the visuals. Some help and physical consultation with Mr. Hafiz helped me to overcome the challenges. I also got to improve on my usage of perspective shots with the help of Mr. Hafiz as he gave me a lot of feedbacks. Overall it was a good struggle and I am glad I got to improve many of my own skills.

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